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A choice.

Do we observe with curiosity
as we should,
do we ever really
see as much as we could?

Is the common ground
familiar enough to ignore,
as we each day walk
our chosen path?

Should we choose to keep looking,
even when we think ourselves
to have seen it all?

I choose to always keep observing,
my choice is to find something new in the old
every time I look upon it.

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  • Tzipora
    June 27

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    life does repeats its self.
    this reminds me of that quote
    "beauty is in the eye of the beholder."

    beautiful take. another write ive fallen in love with.


    • Fixsius
      July 3
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      there is more to fall inlove with than we can see with our eyes,
      hear with our ears
      or feel with our body.


      or something, its 2 am and its hot - what do you expect from a whattayoucallit-retired/poet?

  • thought provoking.

    this was a nice write. keep writing.

  • nice for pondering..this was cool.

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