Love is a spear
that will pierce any shield
mattering not
if instructed to yield.
Love is a hunger
combined with a hug.
A gooey concoction
is this passion called Love.
Love is a mountain.
Love is a storm.
Love can protect you,
and keep you from harm.
Love lifts you high,
and then takes you down.
From the top of Creation
down to your little town.
Love is a puppy,
or a kitten so sweet.
Love is pure honesty
for both you and me.
Love is the answer,
for all of your pain.
Love is his hard work,
both in sunshine and rain.
Love is the beauty
of his deep sleep and then,
his love is there for you
as he does it again.
So don't allow hatred
to steer him aside.
Go out there and love him,
it's a great, wild ride.
And if you let him in,
and he loves you too,
just imagine the great things
which are waiting for you!
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Comments
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beautiful
The rhythm is very lively, i like i alot.
and the optimistic tone and wonderful message makes this surely something i will read again.(=
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Excellent
This is a very beautiful poem, smooth and a joy to read from beginning to end.
My favorite part is:
"Love is a puppy,
or a kitten so sweet."
Tiki Cat
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This is sweet! I can feel the love. Thank you for the entry.
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