Matters not the color of skin
or the lack of religion;
when in need of aid
it's good to reach out
requesting assistance
from those who will give it.
Matters not language barriers
or the country or origin;
when asked by one for help
a crutch is good to share
with those who limp,
or have fallen behind, to catch up.
Author notes
Crutch
A contest entry
- crayola crayons, crunchy crackers, crabby creatures... by deadcolor dreams.
700 points, ended July 25, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Your compassion flows through your lines in this short write..Seems we are smitten with the same feelings..to lend a hand, and the color of one's skin is immaterial, for they all have a soul God loves...Enriching reading, friend...Keep penning!
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This one has a good message- thank you for your entry.
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Excellent
This is so good and positive. Good advice.
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excellent poem erika...been a while since ive read your inspirations..glad I did today
as always your words sink deep
I ponder then sigh
mal
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This written with so much truth, and sends a special message. Very well done. Good luck in the contest!
Love & Light
Debbera
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Ah, friend how true, a friend in need is needed no matter who...and to give help indiscriminately should be the same...We are all brothers and sisters...You make a poignant truth penned here....Glad to see you back as well!
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Good poem sensitively done, message is true nad heartfelt.
All the best in the contest!
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