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Drops of Jupiter

I look at the girl across from me
Seeing things others don't see
She looks like she's far away from here
Daydreaming of a place where people steer clear

She's so carefree, like a summer day
The way she walks leaves nothing to say
Her disposition reminds me that fate is up to me
To do what she did and do some self-discovery

When she left, it broke my heart
She never knew I loved her from the start
But here's my chance, it's just me and her
I need to show her how I feel

It's like she's in outerspace
Drops of Jupiter running down her face
The atmosphere can't hold her down
As Hayleys comet took her for a go around

She told be about her adventures on the road
Oh, how her face lit up and glowed
As she explained how she faired
I wondered if she missed me when she was out there

She told me she fell in love
With a crow in disguise as a dove
But now she's back and she will see
How much she truly means to me

For I am in love with a wonderful girl
who found herself as she travelled around the world
Up to the sky and out to the stars
Her hair dusty from the dust of Mars

Author notes

Drops of Jupiter by Train. I kinda like this poem...

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  • Tqop
    May 25
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    Rock on! Beautifully recreated.