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postponing reality

The wall melts
the floor blooms
the box around me is burning down

I stayed up to watch the sunset
what the hell am I going to do now.

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ever had this feeling?

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  • yeaps. i've felt this way. and wow, this feels so real. i know this like a looong overdue comment, sorry. but i really love this poem, it was short, and you really get your thoughts across perfectly.