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heartless

every tear that has fallen for you,
every chance i gave you,
you threw it all away,
i gave you my heart,
and you stabbed it,
killed it.

my heart,
it's gone,
disappeared,
you made me the heartless person i am now,
i hope your happy,
breaking apart other girl's hearts,
making them like me,
dead inside,
but still living wishing they were dead.

you've made so many girls heartless,
but yet no one can hurt you,
maybe your the heartless one,
not caring who you hurt,
just getting what you aimed for all along,
maybe your dead inside and want everyone else to feel your pain,
well now i do,
i want to die,
is this what you wanted?

a heartless world?
all because of you?
well,
they say karma is a bitch,
well what did i do wrong?
i'll tell you,
i loved you,
i loved you and that is what i did wrong,
so punish me as you wish,
i'm dead inside anyway,
there's nothing you can do to hurt me,
nothing at all.

i'm just some heartless soul,
waiting for her time to come,
where her soul can roam freely,
and you,
you can move on to your next victim,
the world full of heartless people,
what a miserable world it will be.

do you see the pain in my eyes?
can't you tell what you've caused me?
well i can surely feel it.

why did you do this to me?
what did i ever do?
besides love you,
all i did was love you,
never asked for anything,
and now i'm all alone,
pulling the blade to my wrist,
wishing i never loved you,
wishing i could stop loving you,
wishing all the pain could just go away,
HEARTLESS.

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--- pain, agony, misery.... HELP ME!!!! ----

can't you see how hurt i am?

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  • love it

    wonderfully put i love it parting at such sweet sorrow nice write hun, nice keep it up i hope that some time you heart will heal

  • Such sorrow..

    Most guys are horrible with how they treat girls. There are some nice guys out there, but most of them are taken or are so broken that no girl would even notice them or care. Try to find someone as broken as you so that together you can mend each other's heart..or perhaps just block yourself from ever being hurt again. I myself will continue in my search of love though it may in fact kill me..or perhaps I am already dead and have yet to relize this. Well, it was a very good poem by the way. I liked it..


  • Wutz Luv
    May 27
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    Nice write

    You were too good for him and he knew it


  • Candy6381
    May 25

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    wows..
    it was great!!!!!!!
    totally loved it
    aww and i'm sorry if ya feel that way
    (u is a great writer )

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