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Headache (Rewritten)

Oh how my ears ring,
How the pain bells ding,
Stubborn headache,
Go away for goodness sake,

I do this and that,
Yet it's there big and fat,
I try to think of different words,
But I can only tangle cords,

Light shines through the eyes,
To cause many sighs,
Loud noises go through my head,
Not easier said,

It controls my actions,
If even by small fractions,
Its hard to think with it,
Only bit by bit,

Its the harshest writers block,
Its laugh seems to mock,
I guess tis time for pain killers,
Those small little thrillers.

Author notes

It is a rewrite of one of my first poems, ^_^. Written On Jan 24 6:59 PM 2007.
I had a headache when I wrote it the first time but not the second time.

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