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Always...




This burning sensation of my heart
mentally tormented without you in my sight
Weakens my every move
so dependant on my bestfriend

Heavy burdens pounding on the back of my shoulders
as if a jack hammer, was drilling in the rock of my bones
reality of sad adoted memories
fills my stomach with blazing fire,

crunching, tossing and churning
Thoughts of loneliness, corrupts my breathing soul
Silently yearning for your strength,
Mine on yours whispers without a sound

Images of our past, crying, laughters,sons and daughter
Erupting thoughts of you with another
As it sucks the life out of me ,with a smile I create
Too painful to seek the truth,

The tears have ended embrace a weeping heart
Forever which mourns for the loss of her soul mate and ALWAYS will be

Ive accepted this decision you have made
Happiness is all I want for you then you must have the same for me,
BE TRUE , even if it means saying GOODBYE
Then we will both know that true love will never fail

Live your life to the bravest you can be
My heart is yours even if you dont return to me
Loving you so much , I gotta let you succeed
Patience is the Key
If it was meant to be

So in our departed ways, the paths of our days
In the souls of our children
They sing and pray

"Always !! "

A contest entry

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  • LionessK silver member
    May 27

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    welcome to allpoetry

    Great first stanza, I know exactly what you mean here and I can feel all that emotion in your words. Nice job writing it out.

    keep writing on and good luck in your contest.


  • i love your background... and the poem was amazing. so dependent on my best friend... really got me to thinking. lol. you know, like, maybe i am like that. idk. love is strange and bitter at times.... an uneventful burden. but, it happens. i really like this poem. it captured what i am feeling down to the t. awesome job. really