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Memorial Day?

Too often obscured
by the fog
of daily life
are remembrances

Our thoughts propelled
by today's wants
of tommorrow
hiding banality

Only reminded, interrupted
by an event
of scheduled observance
diminishing authenticity

Maybe tragic loss
by nature or man
of significant power
clarifies vision

Forced or coerced
by shock and the reality
of not being alone
memories stirred

Now made aware
by the clamoring throng
of holiday revellers
memories flicker

Prompted to salute
by ostracizm or honor
of things sadly forgotten
temporary sorrow

The fog is lifted
by communal celebration
of warrented dedication
we cheer

Never to be shaded
by dayplanners objectives
of unimportant fodder
till tomorrow.






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Woke up happy and was then hit with the cynical stick

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