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The Food of the Gods

They say; “the food of the gods is chocolate”
And they say that true love should be savored.
I’ve learned what it takes to be passionate;
It’s when my lover’s flesh has been flavored.

When slow rich chocolate is poured on my god,
The confection blends with masculine scent.
The more time it takes the more he’ll be awed
And foreplay like this becomes an event.

When he’s fully attentive and I lose control
I let myself go and swallow him whole.

 

 

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  • awannabepoet
    July 8

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    Seems like you almost discovered Nutella here, for what is not so Godly of such a hazelnut chocolate spread of the most divine kind.

    I like it, I like it so!

  • arnal
    May 29

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    I really enjoyed this imaginative piece and how you got everything you needed to put in came out so right,enjoyed.


  • RedAquarius
    May 29

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    You naughty, naughty minx. This is great, especially the ending couplet. Mm, mm good!


  • Emmyb gold member
    May 27

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    haha. this is so sexy and I totally understand you are in a place in your life right now where things are totally hot and romantic.
    a fantastic read - I am smiling

  • Purrsanthema
    May 26

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    Did you write this before your honeymoon, or during? I don't think any one needs to worry too much about you two having a good time! Just make sure it's 50 50!

  • Papagallo
    May 26

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    This is so exotic and so hot. Chocolate can do wonders in the art of making love. Whipped cream works too. > Papagallo


    • Amera gold member
      May 26
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      Haha… Cool Whip; whipped cream sours on the skin.


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    May 26

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    I wonder if it's as good with honey!!!!
    Very good images are floating around in my mind ... experimentation is always good

    All the best

    Sue
    x


  • Errant Panther gold member
    May 26

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    sensual, saucy and hot ...... mmmm just the way I like my chocolate. very vivid and engaging piece, well done and best wishes for the contest my friend.


  • Raspy
    May 26

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    Lol Brilliant !

    Hi sweetie:
    This was brilliant,and I share your sentiments completly.
    I'm a confirmed
    Chocaholic,Swiss,even better! But i'll settle 4 anything.
    Eating it of him,lol,tastes even creamier.
    An orgasmic stimulating write!
    PS. Try chocolate with nuts,puts some crunch into the nibble.lol. "


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    May 26
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    AHEM!


    • Amera gold member
      May 26
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      hehe... I know, not everyone likes chocolate!


  • Pure Thought silver member
    May 26

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    WOW, you know what fantastic images you have painted in chocolate!
    This is good to the last drop...


  • StarEyes
    May 25

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    Sis,

    I would never have thought you would write anything like this! hehe. This is great! I love this!!! Sounds like it could be quite fun to me!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Rob. gold member
    May 25

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    "The more time it takes the more he’ll be awed
    And foreplay like this becomes an event."

    love it.

    crank "Def"'s pour some sugar on me and, call it a night.

    dirty gurl




  • Wandika gold member
    May 25
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    Chocolate is good

    Red wine is better.


  • Galaxy2
    May 25

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    Wow!
    Tastes like chocolate...
    What a beautiful end:
    When he's fully attentive and I lose control
    I let myself go and swallow him whole.
    Kisses all over, honey!
    Galaxy2


  • JohnnyD gold member
    May 25

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    Hummmmmmm- I assume you relish nuts with your melted chocolate>>? Small amounts of dark chocolate- are great for coronary health and walnuts are usefull for sleep purposes- But I don't think you're concerned about either huh?

    LOL!

    Dad


  • cricketjeff gold member
    May 25

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    MMMMMMMMM
    If you don't mind, I shall take this one nice and slow ...

    (and deep!)

    Great stuff, and I havea great grin too!

    Jeff


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 25

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    Very spicy.. mmm

    Thanks for sharing with us.


    Mark


  • PurpleAraucana
    May 25

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    sex and time, never too much of either. food, i could take it or leave it. but, chocolate, eh? my oh my...
    great poem!


  • PerVirtuous
    May 25

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    This is not just good, it's scary good. I think we need to hold you up as a role model. This is a poem one can really sink their teeth into. Yummy, sweet, and a perfect ending. Makes my truffles quiver.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    May 25

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    WWWWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOWWWWWWW

    Now that was some good EATIN!! l.o.l. damn, this is super blazing hot lady!! gosh, i gotta go uhmm..get some very very cold water..

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