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Futility

Crumbling,
Pieces of me break
and dispel themselves to the air,
Dying,
Everything twisting
like a coil of barbed wire around my heart
and I know
that not one part of you
has noticed yet
that I am falling to pieces at your news.

And I am sure she is beautiful,
I bet she is thin,
I know she’ll be clever,
Much more than I’ve been,

And I hate her, I hate her,
For the things she can do,
The way she can spend time,
Spend time loving you.

Drowning,
I lose myself
inside the vodka bottle
and choke upon
the pills I promised you I would not touch

But it doesn’t matter anymore. 

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  • themadmike
    May 25

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    I found this piece extremelly moving. I could feel your heartache whilst i was reading this.

    I know the content is sad and personal, but i've gotta say, this is a brilliant piece of work. Stay strong.