It began on a starry night
with the moonshine above my head
and you were miles away
But i could hear your smiles
on a late night phone talk
you made me laugh so hard
And i felt you closer
like you were next to me
and we mused over happy times
We met on few occassions
you were just the same
the kind that made me drool
It's about one year,
we shared more than friendship
I know the fondness we have
But it's not meant to be,
or so it seems-
what if we still try again?
Author notes
Oh noes!
A contest entry
- Complete And Utter Emotion!! by ChunkyC.
900 points, ended June 19, 77 entries
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Comments
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Hmm.. This seems very poorly written. I liked it at first, the first few stanzas were good. But it sort of died at the end. What happened? :[
Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest :] -
well done
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