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Rainy Weather

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I thought of you
when the rain picked up my scent
and chased me into dreams too dangerous
for calm weather

I guess it was the thought of sleep
and those sweet dreams
that dance to the sound of water
singing songs
of love and tangled sheets
undercover

Oh what a dangerous thing it is
to listen to the songs of raindrops
with a naked mind
too exposed for the weather

 

 

 

 

 

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Author notes

I love the Bare album, but it brings back stormy memories.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aN0jjjgko3g

Image: Duo by rdwstudio in deviantArt

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  • Heart Sutra
    May 27
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    ah, the romance of rain...we are so easily seduced by it.


  • AllexisReed
    May 26

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    Well, sometimes I highlight my favorite parts in a poem and comment on that particular line, but in this case I would have to highlight the entire poem. This is wonderful. I love where you take the reader. So peaceful and yet erotic.


  • BehindTheShadow
    May 25
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    That third stanza is the shizatt!


  • charcoal
    May 25
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    naked mind hehe

    and the poem... beautiful