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Permanent Memorial

Maybe I don't look like the 'type' to get a tattoo anywhere,
perhaps you wouldn't guess I'd do something so permanent.
I know I change my mind more than I change my underwear,
but you have absolutely no idea what these initials represent.

"CRS" upon my wrist - you'll probably make assumptions;
an ex-boyfriend, perhaps? Maybe the one I'm with today?
But thinking that will prove to be a most foolish presumption,
for this tattoo immortalises the uncle I lost along the way.

My uncle Chris was covered in designs from head to toe -
from the grim reaper to the ones he couldn't show his mother!
He took great pride in his tattoos, loved having them on show,
but suddenly he was gone; he died before he could get another.

What better way to remember him than his initials on my wrist?
I know that he would have loved it; even my father approved!
No ink could ever truly express just how much he is missed...
but unlike poems and photographs, this memory can't be moved.
 

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  • DesolatELifE
    July 21
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    A brilliant way to end such a poem.

  • The only tattoo i have is in memory of my uncle and grandmother, and i love it more than anything. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!

  • Wow, this was so heartfelt, and had a kind of dark take to it. Your imagery is strong, and the dedication just flows through off the tongue. Great job on this and good luck in the contest.

    Josh

  • i agree. tattoos can be an awesome way to remember someone

  • I absolutely agree. Tattoos are for ever, a great memorial.

  • I have to admit its not my favourite poem you have entered in this contest. However, as I'm coming to expect, the rhyme scheme is near flawless and the sentiments expressed are adorable.

    Thank you for entering "Peer Pressure the Third", Good luck.


  • Kathrin silver member
    May 28

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    amazing

    this is truly amazing, you have an eye for talent because you posess your own, its all over this poem I loved this xx

  • a good poem, ah tattooes, i have the reaper, i am not covered head to toe in them though, but i know a few who are. one to celebrate another is good, it's all tribal language.

  • oh, so well done. what a wonderful thing to do. and a wonderful reminder, although im sure you would remember him anyway. it is like a tribute to him. well written and beautiful story behind it.

  • A good poem and true( I imagin), we all have special people who we have met along the way. They can give us hope for the human race, well done
    david

  • Wow. This is the most powerful entry that I've read so far! I to lost my uncle ears ago....I was just a little girl then, buit I still miss him so much that it hurts just to think of him. This is a well constructed poem. It's beautiful and strong. I love how you talk about the false assumptions that go along with a name or initials tattoos. Bravo, you did a great job with this, exactly what I was looking for! Good luck in life. Good luck in this contest. And may your uncle's sul rest in peace.

    • Thankyou so much for your lovely comment; this is an uncle who was a father and a best friend rolled into one, so I took his death rather badly... and shockingly, this is the first poem I've written about it! I haven't been able to before, so thank you

      Maria

  • A very fitting memorial for what seems a very important uncle.
    You've done his memory honours, but you know that.

    Informative, literate and on every word I could see the tale unfold.
    Beautifully written.

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