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Tipsy

Tumbling down;
the world is tumbling down.
The world is falling and crumbling,
tripping, and stumbling--
The world is shifting.

Tumbling down;
the world is tumbling down.
The world is falling, and crumbling,
shifting, and stumbling.

The world is tumbling down.

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  • Andrew Bernau
    July 10

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    From One Cynical Political Thinker to Another...

    YESSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Bloody awesome presentation. Almost childish in it's commentary, but innocence is the best weapon against ignorance and therefore politics, so admirably presented.

    Sorry, I just relized that I really haven't done much on this site in a freaking long time so I decided... do what I used to do... bother Alyssa!