As cold crimson drops fall,
Fall,
Fall,
Into this blazing inferno,
That scorches the very soul.
Your eyes shine,
And sparkle like your name.
Burning,
Your tortured essence,
Into their hearts.
Only few have dared,
To make your life drip,
Slowly but as sweet,
As honey.
Yet your essence burns into them,
Into their cracked palms,
That bloodied your face.
Pure crystals fall,
Mixed with your bitter blood.
Only to burn,
A mark that will stand forever still,
In your torn flesh.
You take one last look at this pain,
And decide to become,
Your one true self.
Your name,
Your soul,
Your heart.
You stare into the inferno of your hope,
And fall.
Fall into yourself,
Your star....
Author notes
If you don't know Estrella means Star in Spanish. I met a girl once who's name was Estrella and well it became one of the two name I just fell in love with... Anyway this is about a girl named Estrella, but not linked to anyone in specific.... Sorry if it sucks, just trying to write again after a long writers block.....
A contest entry
- we are what happened when god closed his eyes. by aanika.
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Comments
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i had to come back adn read this. i love the name. thanks for the read
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Pure crystals fall,
Mixed with your bitter blood.
Only to burn,
i like that.
i also like the title and the author's notes explaining it.
estrella is a beautiful name (:
thanks for entering. -
that is a pretty poem. i think that is a pretty name. i never knew anyone who would have a name like that but that is cool!
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