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Unequaled Assurance

through everything
i've gone through..
endless heartbreak,
distrust, and confusion

you were there

and so tonight
the final night
of her, and of me
it has become obvious

you were there

as clear as can be
as far as can see
as i sit here alone
with no one to hold
i know for a fact
that nothing you lack
with your hand as my guide
sitting together, side by side

you'll be there

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  • crimsondew
    November 3
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    feelings expressed nicely..we all need that one person to be there always....


  • amnouup
    November 3
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    Ohhh

    I liked the personification of "assurance", its emotionaly both cool and cold :-)


  • cyberwaif
    July 8

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    nice write its sometimes the steadfast ones that mean the most even if we dont realise it straight off! you've got a nice rhythm going here,it feels like the calm after the storm well done I like 1t a lot!


  • nobodys-girl
    May 26

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    i actually really like this one...i've had a friend that has been there for me through everything, all the guys who broke my heart, my parents..., just everything and this reminded me of her in a way. awesome write!