Well… this little panda was alone in a ghetto so a girl named Mandy who was alone with some foster parents because she was adopted so Mandy never went to school to learn or to do activities. The girl even was abused for no reason so she went to different foster parents. They were nice and they had 2 kids. But since they got another child, they have 3 kids now. The little girl had no one to
play with so they went to Chuck E. Cheese; they were done playing games and she had 3,519,678 tickets so she said,
“Oh!! Mommy that poor little panda is so left alone.
So she said “I want that panda!! Oh please!Mommy can I enjoy that panda by getting it!“
So the mom said, “Oh sure, honey so the lady that worked there said;
“Is that all you want precious. So she said;
?Yes mam."
" Are you sure?"
"YES I’m pretty sure indeed."
So she took him with her everywhere she went.
Now everytime they went to bed the little panda just snuggled up really close. And then, the panda whispered softly and said,
“I’m glad she picked the right one. “
So they lived happly ever after!
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im glad i tried
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You are wonderful. But getting better in poetry is a journey. I wrote the first song when I was 6. The first poem to school when I was 9. It takes a long time to be 'great', but it did not happen at once. It was writing, and writing, and writing that made it get better.
Love you so much! Love in Christ, Nanah
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This narrative ( writing that tells a story) is very well given to the reader.
Like a book we read, this story tells us step by step what happens with a little girl who is first fostered by abusing people, but who is put into a home where there is love and a wish that is granted. This happens through a stuffed panda. She becomes happy with nothing else but this.
Her adopting family assures her that this is wonderful, and since she now has a new bedtime
favorite AND a good family, she is very happy.
You did a wonderful job. You must be your Nanah's girl.
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awwww, itz cute!
wow. this is a beautiful paragraph for a kid like you. may god bless you and keep writing. i was just like u wen i was ure age.
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thank you! for sending the wonderful comment! I hope you have a really really really great beatiful day!! Let god bless you and your day!!
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