Into radiate love mingles across arrows divine
from hatred inst the morning glow
around natures raindrops thy dew forms prisms
mine Goddess inst you to name unto
from more your utter half blue
dist thine flow of locks
to raging forest dirks
Crescent I dangle
wakes the love dew shimmer
over valleys glow
there's the name of warming love
love of emotions into days beyond
After dears of years ...
she holds dreams
to share with her repression
not an oppression
flowers flutter, butterflies blossom
Her name might be same
as crystal morns into moonlight freckles
over chattering rain drops metal-ling love
greens sword the sky to kiss sun rays
fences maroon,black shadows waking bellow
Bells hark the church tower shivering slots
Goddess sores after dark shadows bewildered
A contest entry
- Only 2 prompts by spiritraven.
750 points, ended June 7, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow Outstanding piece of writing the imagery is grand and the flow is perfect the emotions are strong I am stunned with the talent you have put forth in this one wow thats what I say... best of luck in the contest
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Good
Still not sure what name you gave me though. Is it Crescent? Anyway nice write, flow and imagery. Thanks for entering the contest and good luck
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