Looking up I see you cry
I feel like crying too
I don't know why
Maybe because of what we had
Rips apart my soul, and I can feel
How it's tearing you up inside
You scream out my name
I can't return the favor
You can't hear me and I can
Hear the Sirens comping in the distance
I wonder distantly who called it in
And I'm trapped in this hollow shell
Until you let me go, but I can tell
That even if I could speak
Nothing seems like the right thing to say
When I'm watching you watch it all fade away
A contest entry
- prewrite conest by serenity silvermoon.
1500 points, ended June 12, 429 entries
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Comments
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Awe...
Very beautiful. I loved how you masterpieced this to the last line. It was very heartfelt, and very meaningful. Thanks so much for sharing. I loved this.
Evemauy
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^_^ Thank you!
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