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Watch it all fade away

Looking up I see you cry
I feel like crying too
I don't know why
Maybe because of what we had
Rips apart my soul, and I can feel
How it's tearing you up inside

You scream out my name
I can't return the favor
You can't hear me and I can
Hear the Sirens comping in the distance
I wonder distantly who called it in

And I'm trapped in this hollow shell
Until you let me go, but I can tell
That even if I could speak
Nothing seems like the right thing to say

When I'm watching you watch it all fade away

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  • Tqop
    May 24

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    Awe...

    Very beautiful. I loved how you masterpieced this to the last line. It was very heartfelt, and very meaningful. Thanks so much for sharing. I loved this.

    Evemauy