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Green

A green crayon, I marvel
watch you're indifferent scrawling
note down the thoughts deep in your face
to know for next time that you're calling

and I stare, the graceful markings
that wander from your lifted hands
so blissfully and easily,
the brightest green in all the land

How perfect you appear,
when you focus somewhere far away
and beauty sparkles in your eyes,
although you have no words to say

The art that spills from heart and tongue
the most gorgeous that I've ever seen
and after all, it's clearly noted
that my favourite colour's green.

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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    May 26

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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    I love your thoughts on the color green, that happens to be my second favorite color! I like the way you made this rhyme, too!
    Welcome to AllPoetry! If you have any questions, feel free to IM me!

    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy