in a house full of people feeling so alone,
wondering when this will end,
you would have thought id grown,
its been so long since the first time...
saying goodbye is so hard,
the tears that flow, the heart that hurts,
the wounds that were left have scarred,
the smiles echanged as memories...
the tears, the fights, the laughter,
the good days and the bad,
for yesterday, today and hereafter,
the fear thats always lurking...
oh how i will miss you,
the long summer to come,
the lonely days... there'll be a few,
baby stay,keep me, dont ever leave me...
Author notes
not quite finished i think.... just .... what do you think?????
id like your opinion....
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Perfect
This poem is very sad but very poetic. It has much words and feelings it's teaching the readers. Great write. It has much potential and very unique! Keep writing!!! -
'ts Ok
I get it. You're going into summer break. I went through this once. Either it happens or it doesn't. You get on with life and figure it out later.
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i feel the emotion
this is an amazing poem. pease keep writing
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I really enjoyed reading this poem. The flow was nice and you can invision these sad souls that are alone. Love it! My favorite line... the wounds that were left have scarred... I think that sounded so awesome. Thanks so much for sharing this piece with us!!
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such an emotional piece. you can feel the heartthrob and the saddness and the love and the pain. it all just gets through to you. the flow is great and the feeling it leave you with is just.. wow. i can really relate. great write!
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