The Prime Chancellor ordered that we fire on this primitive world(J867-5309 on our charts).
No matter how infantile their nuclear research is, it is still a deadly foe.
Their tracking systems are far superior in technology comparatively speaking.
Both together could theoretically take down one of our capital ships.
We will destroy all nuclear facilities and compounds, our laser cannons much more than their pitiful defenses can hope to handle.
Fireflies dance
flickering willy nilly -
impact points on Earth's surface
In a list
A contest entry
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I like this.
"impact points on Earth's surface"
Congratulations on the bronze!
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congratulations on the bronze thingy
earth to Griswold, they were aiming for Shag Harbor, only a few kilometers away, save the earth, we will give up our secret recipe for Rappie Pie promise! loved the read thanks
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willy nilly-smile-one of my favorite phrases, a well penned Haibun and Haiku, good luck in the contest
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a good piece and thank you for entering - it has a good message though...
Earths surface - Earth's surface - the surface is belonging to earth here so an apostrophe is needed.
defenses - defences - okay that is usa spelling
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