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I face only myself....



Little stars glitter in the distance,
and a miniscule smile appears on my dirty face.

Yellow teeth grin back at swollen eyes,
yet hungry hands plead out in hope.

This little body screams in anguish,
as the heart beats on strongly with desire.

Breathing becomes harsh on fragile passion -
skin has tares from long beatings,
blood seeps slowly without reason -
a demon holds me in their grip.

I turn to stand my ground
what I see frightens me,


there I am,

 


pulling myself back towards my dark abyss.

Author notes

It's a constant struggle of push and pull...within my heart.

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  • Strong feelings come through here and are felt by the reader.


  • Rclane gold member
    June 7

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    Ah... the internal strife that we've all felt at list once in our life. Nicely penned to your thought. Thank you for your entry.

  • Alitare
    May 25
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    Not bad. Vivid imagery, and thought out structure. I enjoyed it.