砂漠のGaara
I stole the life of my mother at birth
And as the Kazekage's son
I was overprotected, alone and spoiled beyond all
I thought that was love
Until everything happened to change it all
For as long as I can remember
My father had tried to assassinate me countless of times
Why do I still exist?
Why do I still breath in life?
Those are the questions buried deep
The questions that I couldn't provide the answer to
I need those reasons while I exist
Or It will be the same as being dead
And this is the conclusion
I exist to kill those other then myself
I fight only for myself
I love no other but myself
As long as there is people around me to kill in this world
My existence will remain
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for the record. desert (i dunno if thats what you menat but it makes sense) has one too many s's. othet than that this poem is quite good. sorry if thats not what you meant but it sound like it maight have been
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to T.o.r.t.u.r.e. :
(don't mean to be a smart ass, yet do at the same time because its me
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for the record: "menat" should have the "a" and the "n" flipped around so it looks like "meant"
and also, "maight" has an "a" when it should not have for it should be "might" 
forgive my smart-ass-ness (or however you want to spell/say that ) i just could not resist 
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as for the poem itself, pretty good. describes gaara's mindset nicely.
well done and keep up the good work.
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