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Magic

I know a secret
Except it's not a secret
We all knew it was true
Until they told us it wasn't

I know a secret
Do you want to know my secret?
My secret is magic
I know that it exists
I'm convinced

Now its my turn to convince you
What's happiness?
Happiness is magic
What's hope?
Hope is magic

What are your dreams?
They're magic too
What is the truth?
The truth is magic

All this magic exists
Weren't we convinced of that as small children?
But somehow we all forgot about it
We believed we didn't believe

But believing in magic
is believing in happiness
Is believing in hope
Is believing in your dreams
Is believing in the truth
Magic is believing in yourself
Magic is something we've all forgotten how to do
But that doesn't mean we can't try

Magic is a 14 year old girl
Wrists covered in scars
smiling for the first time in far too long
as she writes this poem

we all need to believe in magic
Have i convinced you yet? (:
Be magic, because together
we can be magical

Just wrote this, please let me know what you think

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  • MissVampire
    June 15
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    i like it

  • i like this a lot!

    i thought it was kind of dorky/annoying at first, but then it grew on me!
    i really like the 7th stanza! good job, keep writing

  • Well written, I like the concept behind this. It is a beautiful thing to see the magic in everything around us, and yes, as we grow older we tend to forget.

    I can see the comment below, PhantomsAngel87 has made you aware of the background and font clash, so you do not need me to remind you.

    Again, well written!

    Phoenix

  • Welcome to AllPoetry

    I think the poem is great; it is wonderful to read magic like this - just a hint, the font colour is black like the background and the poem is invisible on the page unless highlighted

    You can fix that by clicking 'Edit background' on the right hand side and changing the font colour

    Keep Writing! I hope you enjoy AllPoetry

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