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Boston

You've got big dreams
and a stubborn way
that makes me believe
you'll achieve them all

Giving any of them up
for just a stupid boy
isn't good enough for you
you want to have them all

I'm not standing here
just to get in you way
I don't want to stop you
from having the world

But baby please understand
that you are my dream
I'm just as stubborn girl
I'll have you in the end

We'll work it out together
here is a simple offer:
follow all of your dreams
do anything you want babe

Just promise to stay with me
I'll be with you through everything
as long as you let me be there
I'll help you with all your dreams

As long as you make mine come true

Author notes

I don't know. I wrote this in about five minutes. It's filled with a ton of emotion, but I don't think you can really tell from the words. I haven't written a decent poem an ages.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Blood N Tears
    August 24

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    This is great, and you CAN definitely feel the emotion. Its beautiful, and I can really relate to this. I especially liked "But baby please understand
    that you are my dream
    I'm just as stubborn girl
    I'll have you in the end"

    That was beautiful. I look forward to reading more by you.
    ♥Lillie♥


  • Denali
    June 22

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    Understand.

    I definately see where you're coming from and I can feel your emotion, even though it's not laid on too thick.