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Boom Boom the Dinosaur

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Boom Boom the Dinosaur walking through my dreams at night
Boom Boom the Dinosaur was an overwhelming sight
He stood there in all his glory – towering over one and all
Romping through my dreams I saw him – made me feel so very small

Boom Boom the Dinosaur stomping through my dreams he went
Boom Boom the Dinosaur a rumble through the ground he sent
On and on he swayed in rhythm to the beating of my heart
Thumping on across my dreamland – living in a world apart

Boom Boom the Dinosaur passes on and leaves no trace
Boom Boom the dinosaur wanders on in all his grace
Awakened by the light of dawn I arise to greet the day
Knowing that by night lights falling he will come again my way

Boom Boom the Dinosaur walking through my dreams at night
Boom Boom the Dinosaur was an overwhelming sight
Through my dreams he’ll always wander – stomping, swaying as he runs
Through the night as I lay sleeping till the rising of the sun

2.2.1994



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  • Beret55 silver member
    July 17
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    Thats cute.. And well done as usual. Your a good story teller.


    • condor gold member
      July 18
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      Thanks, mate. This one was actually written for my little niece who is now around 19. I do enjoy writing things for little kids as they get so much enjoyment out of simple things. How i wish we were all like that again.


  • Wolfdog silver member
    July 10

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    Superb Plus

    Is he any relation to Barney? A very fun write indeed. Imagery; rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us.


    • condor gold member
      July 11
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      Thank you for reading. One never knows. Dinosaurs are a large family. lol!!!!!!!!


  • Legend silver member
    May 29

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    Gees i Am so glad i do not live in your dreams I would be terrified of closing my eyes On a serious note yet one more enjoyable little tale from a pen that knows how to entertain
    Excellent

  • Cute...

    A delight to read...as always


  • arafura gold member
    May 25
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    Great fun to read! Well written, poet!


    • condor gold member
      May 25
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      Thanks, mate. I will be dropping by as soon as i catch up on some replies here. I am so glad you liked this piece.

  • Hi Condor

    Like this. Just need a 'Little Jackie Paper" and you're good to go!
    I knew a gal named BOOM BOOM once who worked at one of the gents clubs here in Las Vegas. She was dynamite!LOL
    I see you are back on line which is very cool to hear!
    Talk to you soon.

    John


    • condor gold member
      May 25
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      You are a funny guy! Boom Boom...I can imagine. Yes, my computer is back from the doctor after having a heart transplant and all inards renewed. Now i can annoy everyone a little more. lol!!!!!!!!

  • Aww this is just gorgeous. By the picture I am guessing that Boom Boom was friendly? Your flow and rhyme always delight me immensely
    Thank you again for sharing yopur talent! I hope you've been published! And I just adore cats too
    Gaylene


    • condor gold member
      May 24
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      Thanks, mate. I have had this poem on quite a while ago but did some fixing. Glad you liked it and will definately catch you next week for sure. Gotta go watch CSI.


  • rbruce gold member
    May 24

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    I can see some one reading this to his grandchildren and having them extatic about it. Got a great rhythm for reading aloud and is a wonderful kids poem.


    • condor gold member
      May 24
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      Thanks, Bob. Yep. Great for the kids and one i have had on before. I will certainly catch you next week for sure now that i am back on line. Thank you for reading and have a great night. I am off to watch CSI.

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