Timeless beauty caressed
by sand, once his lips and
gentle hand. Teasing and
loving once more, as waves
crash upon the shore.
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Her fires raging from within,
with thoughts of him, loving
her again. Brushing away the
sands of time, revealing her
many treasures, once again.
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Touching the water, each
with their hand, they send
their love to one another;
on waves of love from their
far away lands.
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Counting the days until he
returns, from that far away
distant land. Together again
on their sandy shore, sharing
their love evermore.
Author notes
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By ~ Maxboy
Background By ~ doolie [Do Not Snag]
Prompt Image By ~ Laura Jeffrey
Bronze
In a list
A contest entry
- Come and See by spiritraven.
1250 points, ended June 4, 20 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
~PLEASE COMMENT~
Comments
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excellent
Enjoyed the read & the background
Love these lines
Together again
on their sandy shore, sharing
their love evermore....
Congrats on the bronze entry
I have up about 4 for you to read
Hugs
Your lil sis
Susan~~~
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the background kinda caught me offguard....
but still a great write
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Thank you for your great comment, I am happy you enjoyed my write and the prompt image and background was the reason for the adult rating.
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This is beautiful, and the background really does fit just so perfectly with your delightful words. A poem of absolute love. The whole piece frolicked down the page, with words that spoke of a yearning from deep within. Just pefect as far as i am concerned. Congrats on your bronze and thank you for sharing.
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am happy you enjoyed my write and the background, made from the prompt picture,by my wife doolie.
Thanks Again
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lol nice picture liked this it was pretty neat. I think that this is a really good poem. I like the sensual feel of it. I am going to give this a 5/10 and a place on the finalist list. Thanks for entering
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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"Together again
on their sandy shore, sharing
their love evermore."
Lovley line...so sweet.
this is an excellent write.
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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I adore the internal rhyme in this poem. Made for a wonderful breezy read! Picture is playful and sensual to go along with this awesome piece. Thanks for entering my contest. I’m honored to read your work.sss
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comment Kim, I am very pleased you enjoyed my write.
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Beautiful, soft and sensual. This is some really pretty writing. Thank you.
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am happy you enjoyed my write.
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brilliant poem and one of the tastiest forn pages ive seen love all the girls there and this one here damn id be wiping the sand off that yo bro
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Thank you very much for your great comment Glenn, I am happy you liked my write.
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Congratulations on Your Bronze Cup!!
A beautiful piece, well worthy of more than one trophy here. I wish you all the best in the remaining contests, Don!! Wonderful background, as well... Write on, Poet!! Peace & hugs, xx Cyn
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment Cyn, I am happy you liked my write and doolie's background as well.
Peace & Hugs to you Cyn.
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Beautiful
sensual in such a subtle way good emotion very good imagery I loved reading this job well done thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck in it
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!!! Thank You So Much !!!
Thank you again for the Bronze Trophy and your wonderful comment, I am so pleased you enjoyed my write.
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Beautiful as were the thoughts and feelings that shone in each and every way
What an image to work from
Well done hun
Loved it
Julie x
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comment and the clappies, I am pleased you enjoyed my write Julie.
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Wow, this is a beautiful and heartfelt write sweetie. One of my many favorites from you. The background is awesome, too
Wonderful...Best of luck in the contest
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment sweetie, I am happy you enjoyed my write and thank you so much for making the background for me.
Luv Ya
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This makes me want to cry it is a woman thing.. so beautiful.
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Thank you very much sweetie, I am pleased you liked my write.
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Absolutely beautiful.
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Thank you for your wonderful comment, I am happy you like my write.
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Amazing. Everything. The picture, the words, the flow, the message... you just absolutely nailed this in my opinion. I really adored your ability to just.. pour your words out so effortlessly and beautifully. Well done and good luck.
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write. Not so effortlessly though, had a brain cramp, spent all night on it.
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