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The way your words form around you in every way, the way they dance through my head and make me wish we could be together every second of the day, writing this makes me realize I can't let you go, the love I feel for you will never fade no matter how much i disagreewith this, I know it cannot be, I can't just let you go and leave me alone, I need you. I think about us all the time, what we could be, but the chance has come and gone now and it will not come again not today nor tomorrow its sad , yes but  this is a part of life and everyone gets through lifes rough patches, this ime around has made me see the light in a different way and now I know  better, I have learned about life, love, and realtionships before but now I have learned that those happy endings everyone wishes for, are just in fairy tales, im still  little girl and now my heart can recover and venture on without you.

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my first poem i have written .. EVER , it just sorta came out, but i guess thats what poetry is all about , right ?

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  • Welcome to AllPoetry

    For a first poem, this is beautiful. You've done a magnificant job with imagery and such. Now, one thing I might mention is that you have it going in a continuous line. Instead of continuing it, break the lines up so it reads just a little easier. Thanks for sharing.

    Welcome to the Site,
    Kahy