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Beribboned Ecstasy

I, drawn to dizzying heights
Whilst delicate red ribbons
Infused the muted synthetic floor,

Trembled, blushed, gasped,
All met your inciting ardor,
And bathed in breathless ecstasy.

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Prompt: No Underwear
Words: 27

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  • lunarlunacy
    July 17
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    the title caught my attention, the poem floored me. tight verse that sprawls out with much unsaid


  • Babesface
    May 26

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    I know it's not supposed to be funny but I couldn't help laughing when I read the prompt! Oh and nice poem too! Complex as always!


  • Emmyb gold member
    May 24
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    straight to the finalists list. very interesting and clever.


  • arafura gold member
    May 23
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    Lovely! There's a lot going on between the lines in this one, poet!