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the girl with the golden pen;



The sigh of the waves,
as wind blows her fragile curls
and kisses there tenderness.

The whisper of a lover,
as intimacy indulged is breathless
leaving no spare love,
in her soul

The word extraordinary,
invented for her inventory;
other such words: inspirational,
passionate, expansive--
and all words of excellence,
that ever entered earth's ears
and became spoken aloud.

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for aanika, you are beautiful and a beautiful poet.

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  • Writing0Freedom
    August 10
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    Gorgeaous diction!
    Strong imagery!
    Well done!
    writingfree


  • penman gold member
    May 28
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well written. A great write for the birthday. Best of luck in the contest.

  • woowww, this is amazing, wonderful vocab and great imagery
    really really loved it. x