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The Deformed Yellow Brick Road

The yellow brick road that lay ahead,
The mystery waiting beyond,
The feeble human emotions pushing you on,
Even after everything is done and said,
The cruelty deformed path blurs into the horizon,
With every corner cunningly carved in a twist of fate,
Your lungs screaming hoarsely for someone to respond,
You find yourself all alone and all abandon,
The many tumbling thoughts of anguish and self hate.

Author notes

I only vaguely remembering writing this.
Gah, rereading this I sound so emo ..
Anyway, enjoy..?

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  • Phantomile
    May 24
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    Awesome

    Short and sweet.

    It outlines the confusion and lack of direction of oneself, very well :].