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Hungering Confinement

Hungering eyes begging for a saviour,
From the confinement of misery,
Every doubt in mind,
But they turn a blind eye,
Hands shoved into pockets,
Rushed away in the breeze,
Hopes slashed to shreds,
The pain of falling to your knees,
Tearing the hair from their heads,
And their eyes from the sockets,
The silent screaming of a confused soul,
Fearing the steps ahead,
Of falling in a misplaced hole,
An early grave,
A life loss toll.

Author notes

Depression eats at you, what can I say..
I suppose this is a somewhat better outcome than suicide.

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  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    May 25

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    I also get depressed. I am half the time honestly. But I suffer from bipolar. I hope things get better for you. If you need help getting around allpoetry please IM me.
    Sincerly,
    ~~Shannon~~
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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    May 25

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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    I always find that my writing is very good therapy! It is alot better than suicide....
    Welcome to AllPoetry! If you have any questions, please feel free to IM me!

    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy