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Sad Dreams

Sad dreams of a lost childhood
  Still walk within my soul

Shadows of things forgotten
As the memories softly flow

Whispers of silent words
Things once never said

Visions that haunt the heart
Moving there within my head

Mirrors that do not reflect
Who then I really am

Another soul lost in darkness
On more half broken Man

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  • karma-n-peace
    July 21
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    Mirrors that do not reflect
    Who then I really am

    You really have such a gift with words and expressing emotion through them; whether it be beauty or sadness or beauty in sadness you always manage to touch those who read your poetry.

    So very tragic and heartbreaking...


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    June 6
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    the visions that haunt the heart...mirrors that do not reflect...lost soul in the darkness...lost childhood been there and done that dear one and your words touch a memory...niaish for sharing a little of you with me...just a hug so you will know i understand and do care


  • Sandygram silver member
    May 26

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    Oh So Sad My Friend

    This touches my heart as I feel your sadness. I wish I could reach out and hugs you sweet friend. May God bless you and let your heart smile. I send you warm hugs and my friendship to you. Always here for you,. Love and Blessing John. Sandy