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Lead me on

Once I made a promise,
that i'd never lead you on.
But the yearn of love pulls me to you,
even though I know its wrong.

So you will have to take my hand ,
and lead my heart slowly through the door
I'll be wrong in what I am doing
but to refuse you I'm not that strong for sure.

Take my hand and lead me on,
let love control my will;
because I can't refuse you anymore .
All I need is love"warm and tender"
like I have never had before,

If you want me
I will come with you this is known
but you will have to
lead me on.




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  • SilverWolf
    September 17
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    loved the poem! was very good and amazing! i loved it!!


  • I-Feel-weightless
    May 25

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    Wow. I like it. It's powerful, and I love the emotion.
    Pleeease put your option in your notes. For the contest, It's time to be inspired. Thanks


  • Shadow Seraphim
    May 25
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    Its Really Good.. and the Formation is off but this is Good write ... keep up the Great work..


  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 23

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    If I may

    Once I made a promise,
    that i'd never lead you on.
    But the yearn of love pulls me to you,
    even though I know its wrong.

    So you will have to take my hand ,
    and lead my heart slowly through the door
    I'll be wrong in what I am doing
    but to refuse you I'm not that strong for sure.

    Take my hand and lead me on,
    let love control my will;
    because I can't refuse you anymore .
    All I need is love"warm and tender"
    like I have never had before,

    If you want me
    I will come with you this is known
    but you will have to
    lead me on.


    Its your poem in a different form I hope you dont mind and ignore it if you like but I was curious and set it to form for you

  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 23
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    Very good poem here

    Its like my poem The Near Kiss the link is
    http://allpoetry.com/poem/4638727


  • Karayan
    May 23

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    Very nicely done, and nicely penned. It could do with a little formation help, but the emotion is amazing.

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