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The nights light.

the raven crawls up in the night.
That wasnt the best sight.
The day we will reunite.
i know you didnt want to leave tonight.
But one day you would have to see the light.


life was great with you around.
You cryed and left a frown.
you almost jumped in with me in the ground.
You heart pounds till there was no sound.
I knew you rebound.


if you knew how much i loved you.
I love you is now  long overdue.
You thought our love was untrue.
When i left you knew i was like you tatto.
Close in your heart that when i left you wished for a redo.







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