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When I remember you

When I Remember You
By Charles Marks
TO RKB


When I remember you
  I think of the wind
  As it blew and drifted us near shore
  I think back of the sunny days
  You would grill and take me to your fishing hole
  When the rainy days came
  I remember you pulling out the fishing time
  Just to see if we could beat you



When I remember you
I see your image in the water
And your smile when it flows by
I hear your laugh with the morning crows
Which you dearly loved
When I see a beer can
I think back on how much fun you had
When I heard the model A
I remember how excited you got as the engine roared


When I remember you
I think of the birch trees surrounding
Very Strong and easy to be next to
When I remember you
I just don't see my grandfather
But one of my best friends and my fathers
Who stood by me and caught me when I would tumble and fall
Though all great things have to come to an end
They never go away
They live on,
Forever my friend you’ll be in my heart.

Author notes

Written for my grandfather who lost his fight to Lung Cancer on March 15 2009

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