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Not what it seems ( A rose is a rose is a rose?)


A rose is a rose is a rose
Does it smell as sweet
Without the thorns
Or is a rose just a rose
Concealing our darkest thoughts?

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  • A floatingleaf silver member
    June 14

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    I believe the scent of a rose mask our senses, then we unexpectantly get stuck by the thorn and the evident returns...so is life...Leaf


  • Fallen-Thumper
    May 28
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    that is really powerful and i really liked it, short but prfect in the words, really well written


  • DeathtoloveShade gold member
    May 26

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    Awesome Bells I wish I could write as well as you. s love you mommy Searra


  • Fulabeans
    May 24

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    Wow

    This..is so short and POWERFUL!

    I'm left in awe..and though it doesn't happen often..I'm speechless..

    Very Well Done,
    -Dutsy-

    • Beautiful-Mourning
      May 24
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      the short and powerful poetry makes others think more on it and makes it more mysterious imo. glad you liked it


  • Tarja
    May 22

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    You really hooked me in with that title. I adore that saying. And I think that you did a beautiful job with this piece. You didn't need much to say a whole lot.

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