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My heart

Lay down with me and look at the stars
Hold my hand and tell me you love me.
Don't lie to me because that will break my heart
Like so many girls before before you have.

My heart is a sensitive, fragile thing.
It will go to whoever calls it
If its you please treat it right
Cuz' I don't want it to be you who dies tonight

I remember when I first saw you
You looked so stunning with sparkles in your hair
You stole my heart with just a glance
I followed it blindly into a locked chest

My heart is a sensitive, fragile thing.
It will go to whoever calls it
If its you please treat it right
Cuz' I don't want it to be you who dies tonight

Give me your hand and I'll show you things you've never seen
You turned your back and said hurtful things
I stared at your back and felt a knife in my back
You walked away and used me like everyone has

My heart is a sensitive, fragile thing.
It will go to whoever calls it
If its you please treat it right
Cuz' I don't want it to be you who dies tonight

Sitting here alone in my room
Wishing for the pain to stop
These pictures of you remind me of our times
The times we will never have again

My heart is a sensitive, fragile thing.
It will go to whoever calls it
If its you please treat it right
Cuz' I don't want it to be you who dies tonight

I wish my heart was for sale but its no longer at a decent price
Its been so used and stepped on, that i don't even know if its working
So please if you fall for me don't ask for my heart
It doesn't exist; it was stepped on and used
And now I am empty inside

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Comments

  • wow
    powerfull and strong
    felt the emotion
    great work
    keep pening

    luv cece