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My Broken Promise

I just want to let you know
Before I go

I broke a promise
I said I would keep
I cut my wrists again
Time for me to sleep

I didn't do it recently
A few months ago.
But I thought I should still
Come by and let you know.

And I know you'll hate me now
You don't need to explain
I know what I'm going through
Depression and intense pain

I'm not quite sorry
I know I should be
I broke a promise
I said I would keep

I just want to let you know
Before I go.

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To Alisha.

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  • (hugs) Everything will be okay. (smiles) You'll live on a long life. Beautiful poem.

  • very good

    not the best, but really good still!

  • wow shirt but very moving really like it and i hope that everything is alright

  • Awwwh, *hugggles you better*
    A very saddend poem, I feel the emotion. And you know I'm always on here or facebook if you need to talk to someone . I hope your alright Kera. Cheer up soon x

  • Awwwh, *hugggles you better*
    A very saddend poem, I feel the emotion. And you know I'm always on here or facebook if you need to talk to someone . I hope your alright Kera. Cheer up soon x

  • skittles49
    May 22
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    it was really depressing actually, but very inspiring.

  • awwwww...... tell me about it on tuesday


  • Naznomarn
    May 22

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    Awwah
    *Holds onto you tightly*
    I'm always here to help you ^_^

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