dance with me in the illumining auburn sunset
so look into my gray, blue eyes
and forget all your regrets
like the heartbreak years you’ve spent
The million bitter salty tears you’ve wept
or the times you fell into someone disregard
and their hollowness and complete neglect
or when you weren’t shown one once of respect
so look into my pale blue eyes
and leave your past behind
kiss my full red lips and kiss it all good bye
then you can escape with me into the auburn sky
stop questioning my reasons why
Just for you to know my heart
has been walking by your side for eternity
that why your angelic face has been stained in my mind
through distance ,space and time
what you have yet to comprehend you’ve always have been mine
so hold me in the auburn sunset
and I can forget all the heart breaking years without I’ve spent
stop the million tears over you I’ve wept
or the never ending love I’ve had for you
that went to your complete neglect
Please tell me what you think
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great
It was a beautiful poem but the flow could be a bit better. Over all it was a awesome read:-) Thank you for sharing -
This is beautiful...
I love everything about this!!!
Omg I really love auburn sunsets. I know exactly what you're talking about.
How beautiful. ^_^
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Wonderful!
I absolutely love this poem! I love when you said kiss my full red lips and kiss it all goodbye. However, it is really sad about how you have loved him all those years and he nevered paid any attention to it. I'm sorry. But I really like this poem, it is so colorful!!
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