You ripped out my heart and broke it in two
I just want to scream, but what good will that do
I used to think you were the only one who ever understood me
When we were together I would have bleed my life out for you
I would have done anything to make you feel right
What made you turn out this way I wonder
How could you be so heartless as to leave me for another
I hope soon she realizes what kind of person you really are
And have the strength to leave you like I didn’t have the guts to do
Never come find me I’m cutting you off and this time for good
Never believe I’ll ever take you back
You broke whatever I had left of a heart
I want to make you feel as bad as I feel now
But I know by wanting that won’t make me feel any better
I know I need to take a deep breath and let this go
I now have a black heart that needs time to heal
I don’t think my hate for you will ever just go away
I never want to see you or hear from you ever again
This is the last time you will ever hear from me
Good-bye
Author notes
Oh noes!
Prompt #3
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very good! its very straight to the point... i enjoyed this...
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great purging of emotions to make a final note and say that this is the end! sounds like you made a good strong decision. i loved the aggressiveness of this. most of the pomes i got were a bit more meek and bit more passive. this one is different. great job and good luck in the contest!
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awww, wot a strong poem!!!!!!!! i luv it
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wow.
this was a briliant write.
Full of anger, pain and so much more.
I am so sorry to hear that you had to go
through this. It's painful but hey, you can always make it through no matter what. Hope you're well and that everything goes good.
England girl2008
thanks for posting in the group
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Wow...this is a great poem. I'm sorry that it happened to you, but this is really an amazing poem.
Your language made me feel everything. I almost cried. This is so emotional, so powerful, and so sad. But I love it, really. Your anger was woven into your words and I felt it too.
"Never believe I’ll ever take you back
You broke whatever I had left of a heart
I want to make you feel as bad as I feel now
But I know by wanting that won’t make me feel any better"
Love that part
Keep writing
thanks for entering, and best wishes
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My son's dad did the same thing, but only slept with my best friend while I was pregnant...
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aw omg wot an arse!!! thats so sad- i hope everything went okay...
xxx
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