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One...

One,
There is no one;
Two,
Except me and you,
Three;
Let’s be bold and free
Four:
Ok! Enough!!, no more!!!
five;
it's my life

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  • tearrsofthemoon
    June 23

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    This is unique... I am not sure how I feel about it. It is good though! The rhyme is cute and the poem overall is simple and it flows well. This kind of reminds me of the One, Two, Three song by the Plain White T's. Never stop writing. ♥ tearrsofthemoon