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Sprinkled Dreams

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Sprinkled Dreams


 

Tiny geometries sprinkled in space
Airy symmetries, in the land of fay
Shiny asymmetries that fall into place
Tiny geometries sprinkled in space
Shiny poetries like appliquéd lace
Spiny affinities, at fairyland play
Tiny geometries sprinkled in space
Airy symmetries, in the land of fay

 

 

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Art Work by: CandyKane

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  • Desire gold member
    May 24

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    Oy!!

    Okies what is Your secret
    This is Precious and Witty to say the least
    Love Your short pieces which tickled the tongue
    Woot!

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent
    Yep! Yep!
    Best wishes in all You do Beautiful
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Wandika gold member
    May 24
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    Lovely


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    May 24
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  • XLadyElinorX
    May 23

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    pretty good. . . L5 should have an "-ace" rhyme to comply with the rules. . .but other than that - interesting effect with the repetition of the first two dominant sounds at the beginning of each line. . .

    I wish thee good luck

    ♠ Lady Elinor


    • Amera gold member
      May 23
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      You are absolutely right! Sometimes I miss the forest for the trees. Thank you so much, I fixed it.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    May 22
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    Light, airy and joyful little poem.


  • PerVirtuous
    May 22

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    When I grow up I... no, I like being a man. You can write the feminine stuff. I like it much better that way. Keep it up. Here's three bunnies.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    May 22

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    wow

    you're sooooooooooooooooo good lady, when i grow up i wanna be like you! i see shiny in your future..


  • maralisa silver member
    May 22
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    aw a wonderful write amera I love this good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • painfully amazing
    May 22
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    ahh i love this. great write ♥


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    May 22
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    Tiny Space, Shiny place Your poem was written with upmost Grace


  • cricketjeff gold member
    May 22

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    I can see there are at least 3 or 4 words here that don't rhyme!!!

    A tour-de-force of complex rhyming patterns, great fun and wonderful wordplay

    Jeff


  • DesolatELifE
    May 22

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    Before I read it; is there any reason the first letters are all T, S or A?

    This is an interesting structure. I'm not sure whether I like it or not. Very nice poem.
    I guess it's a triolet, from the list link up there. What's a triolet? I don't need to ask, I'll head over to the link up there and I'm sure I will find out =]

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