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when i look at you

when i look in to your eyes,
i almost want to cry
i can see the past within them,
the hurt that you once felt

when i kiss your lips,
i can taste the liquor you once consumed
i no that you drunk
to numb away your pain

when i hold on to your hands
i can feel the coldness in your fingers
those very hands
caused so much damage to your frail body

when you hold me in your arms
i want to tell you that your safe
i feel the fear inside you
caused by the experiences of your past

when i see you as a whole
i no that you are damaged
so i whisper to you quietly
i love you and promise to never hurt you

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