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The Mocking

It wasn’t real, it wasn’t real!
You weren’t really dead,
you’re as alive, as alive can be.
I’ll never get that scene out of my head..

You’ll never understand..
Every second that went by,
the thoughts going through my head.
I can’t stop them, even if I try.

I can’t lose you,
I wouldn’t survive.
I’d go insane,
Wouldn’t make it out alive.

It was a learning experience,
Or that’s what they said.
I learned how I would feel,
If you were dead.

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We had a mock accident at school today, and it hit me hard. I couldn't get this out of my head until i wrote it down. What do you think?

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  • KitLynn
    May 28
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    Aww

    It's sweet... In a slightly disturbing way...