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Is There Life in This Life

We come into this earthly plane as beings of total love.

But as we grow and share this love and find it not returned,

We hide our love deep within to protect it for ourselves.

Since fear and love cannot exist within the same strike of time,

Fear comes out and rules our life in this illusion that we live.

Fear, pain, mistrust of all is the reality we create.

We give out what we believe and receive back what was given.

It is our choice and we create our future every day.

So find your love within yourself and fear it cannot rule.

Radiate love from inside out and receive back love you gave.

Love and forgiveness are the lessons to be learned.

So that we can move and stay upon the Astral plane.

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  • TragicallyInspired
    June 5

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    Incredibly written..and I regret to say time is against me and I am a little late...I apologize, and I will write a full comment after the contest is over..which should've been yesterday..


  • mattywhite
    June 4

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    Nice write i found that really interesting. Great write. I would love to see more from you, well done on this and good luck in the contest.


  • Rheea gold member
    May 24
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    I really like this it is honest and true, makes one reflect.

  • leeaseng
    May 24

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    GOOD

    in the third line the word "ourself" should be "ourselves". In the ninth line the words "your self" might be better read as "yourself". The rhyme and flow of the words works really well. The closing of this poem is quite satisfactory in that it leaves the reader with a conclusion. Something so many poems don't do well. I wasn't left hanging and I liked that very much. This piece was very well focused throughout its reading.


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    May 22
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    It is true that it is very hard when pure, true love isn't returned in the first place; even worse, when one is abused in return. There is a lesson in this; and you are right - the Law of Universal Love is perfect and the lesson of forgiveness brings us closer to the purer form of love and our higher selves. Thank you for sharing...

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