Oh how I love your spiked up hair
Unnatural in colour,
Attracts the eye
Your pale skin hardened by weather
Yet underneath
You're so soft
You've lived in close proximity
To others like you,
Down and dirty
But like a moth to a bright light
I succumb
To your history
Your history has made you, you
Without it
You'd be lost
Take me into your embrace
You beckon me
With your sweetness
I long to sink my teeth into you
Oh how I love you,
Pineapple.
Author notes
Hahahaha... I was about to fall asleep when this came into my head. So I got up and wrote it and fell asleep straight after. XD I'm awesome. Shuddup.
A contest entry
- Silly, Silly, Silly by misterfish.
950 points, ended July 5, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hahah
Very good..!
X x x
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GREAT WORK! I love the last 2 lines
"Oh how I love you, Pineapple"
HAHAHA!
Thanks so much for entering. Good luck!
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Maybe I don't want to get in your belly Amelia. You can't make me.
And maybe the fruit doesn't want to be there either.
You sadistic woman Making fruit suffer.
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lmao, wow i think it was funny cuz i didn't even think that was what it was about. nice way of deceiving me.
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good one
i like it amelia , great job.
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i freaking love it pineapples are amazing
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Haha!!
Yes! I love it Amelia. Great flow, I was captivated by the second stanza. Only you could write a love poem for a fruit
well done,
-Dustin-
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lmfao amelia.
that was entertaining to say the least. I love you!
haha and i loved this.
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looooool this is awesome. I lurve it. I was totally getting into the whole "oh, love, romance, cool..." feel and then it was like BOOM fruit. totally made my day. ugh, now I'm craving pineapple...
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