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Dancing In The Sheets

Glide across velvet ghosts,
Pulling me along with your moves.
Twirls and twists of lustful innocence,
May I have this dance?

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Second Picture as Prompt.

A contest entry

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  • Sesheta
    May 29

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    Nice title. The first line is really inspired. As is the last line; I really like it. This poem has a sort of melody to it, and I love when poems feel like music.


  • Icarus
    May 23

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    I don't like how a 16 year old is posting sensual poems and a grown man is commenting. That creeps me out.


    • Nicotine Eyes
      May 23
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      1. It was for a contest, he was being nice.
      2. Thanks for taking the time out of your life to actually look at my age.
      && 3. i think ill post whatever i like, thanks.


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    May 21

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    Nice. I like the thought of dancing beneath the sheets. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

    Mike


  • delightfulmess silver member
    May 21

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    Awe that is my favorite dance.
    Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila

  • Alitare
    May 21
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    Not too shabby.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 21
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    Nice dancing. mmm


  • Cannonsfire
    May 21
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    This slides sensually C

  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 21
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    Hey you. Good luck.

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